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Old 03-02-2011, 03:13 AM
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Default Anyone awake whos good in english?

Im up late writing a comparative analysis essay for my english 101 class. I have been reading on the net tips for writing this type of essay, but all the outlines seem to be nothing like what my assigned topic is.

To explain, this is what my teacher wrote for explination of the assignment:

This essay assignment consists of a discussion of the theme of marriage and male/female relationships in three stories by Kate Chopin: “The Story of an Hour,”
“Désirée’s Baby,” and “The Storm,” all of which are on Blackboard. The three stories depict women in marital relationships that are unsatisfactory, mainly because the view of women’s place in society in general and marriage in particular was extremely restrictive. In other words, women did not have the freedom to choose what they wanted to be or do in life; it was determined for them, usually by their parents. Once married, they were all too often simply glorified servants of their husbands. This type of situation can affect women in different ways: they can either rebel against it (“The Story of an Hour” & “The Storm”) or they can be completely brainwashed into believing that they are supposed to be totally submissive and subordinate to their husbands (“Desiree’s Baby”). Show how these stories reveal these different attitudes by discussing each one in relation to this theme, citing and analyzing relevant passages; then, draw some conclusions about the significance that this kind of “relationship” has on a person’s sense of who she is. There is an important issue here that I want you to think about.
This essay should be at least three (3) typed, double-spaced pages, using the MLA format for in-text citations.


On all the tutorials i have checked out, its comparing and contrasting 2 things. My topic is on 3 stories. It kind of boggles mi mind.

Does anyone have any tips? Im not trying to be a freeloader. Just want this essay to be impressive when im done.

I also understand that you may have not read Kate Chopin's stories. Im not asking what to write, more of how would you go about writing a comparative analysis on something that really isnt that black and white.
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Kate Chopin was a very well-respected author who was known for creating colorful works of literature which dug a lot deeper than they appeared to, so to speak. The most interesting part of Ms. Chopin’s stories in my opinion is the way she portrays her views. I picked three of her works to compare and contrast in attempt to break down her ideals. I settled on “The Story of an Hour”, “Desiree’s Baby”, and “The Storm.” In these stories I immediately picked up similarities in subjects. Each story was about a relationship or marriage of a man and woman.
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First, I need to say, I read "the storm"
IT WASN"T ABOUT A BAD RELATIONSHIP. IT WAS ABOUT A ***** LEFT ALONE WITH A DUDE THAT WASN'T HER MAN.

IN A STORM.

they got it on.

again.


I only hope the other stories were better. I needed a damn translator for a language that doesn't exist. F*** that stupid author.
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the theme: marriage and male/female relationships

key #1 The three stories depict women in marital relationships that were unsatisfactory.

The view of women’s place in society in general and marriage in particular was extremely restrictive.
Women did not have the freedom to choose what they wanted to be or do in life; it was determined for them, usually by their parents.
Once married, they were all too often simply glorified servants of their husbands.

women can rebel against it (“The Story of an Hour” & “The Storm”)
In each of these

women
can be completely brainwashed into believing that they are supposed to be totally submissive and subordinate to their husbands (“Desiree’s Baby”).

Show how these stories reveal these different attitudes by discussing each one in relation to this theme, citing and analyzing relevant passages; then, draw some conclusions about the significance that this kind of “relationship” has on a person’s sense of who she is.

You are not in an English class, you are in a feminist class disguised as a literature class.


anyway.. if the other stories are better than smut books, simply cite the passages that focus on the woman's confliction about her role in the relationship versus
"FREEDOM"[aka being independent and not submitting to male dominance.]




trust me, you should be able to fill three pages. {one page for each story} your citation will cover about 1/3 of the page.


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LMAO, you are the man. I wanted to title this essay "trifling hoes" haha. I really and truly cannot figure out why my professor is a womans rights activist.... hes a old ass man.. lol

I wish i had read this info before i finished. Im too tired to re do it now. Im going to get some sleep and revise in the morning.

Thanks sonic, you da man
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good luck.

if it were my assignment I would have a hard time sympathizing with the female characters.

I'd state that "the storm" is about a woman's inability to remain faithful even through ONE F**KING STORM!

yeah.. it's like that.

anyway..

You teacher is handing out assignments like this because he is to Lazy, Incompetent, and or Afraid to actually make up his own assignments.

as it is, you need to get the grammar citations and spelling correct because he is not going to care about much else. {if it reads like the other 15 to 50 essays he has to read, he'll be fine with you} {if he has to expend and mental energy, positive or negative, he won't be nice.}
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if I wasn't going to bed I would help you out. I aced English
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